Vivi
Project 2 Critique – Value
- How is value used in the composition? (Creates 3-d, use of light and dark, mood, contrast). Be specific, if value missing or weak include that also.
I think that value is used very well in this picture. Light coming from the upper left corner really added calmness to this piece. I also noticed the movement of light from darker to lighter really makes the picture look very realistic. I love the way you implemented high contrast in this picture. I liked that the mood in the picture was playful and the way you demonstrated that was by lightness portrayed on the one side of the picture. Overall value played a key role in making this piece very interesting I liked it a lot.
Rufus
2. Project 2 Critique – Texture
What role does texture have in the composition? (Detail, pattern, space, and/or design). Be specific, if texture missing or weak include that also.
Well I definitely see texture in this picture in the way of space. The space is definitely filled with the different pictures. I don’t really see how they link together and the texture in detail is not very apparent. Maybe the pictures could have used a bit more detail to make the piece more interesting. I don’t really see a pattern in this picture other than everything being green. The shape in the upper right corner of a little girl walking with shopping bags looks like flat texture, and added depth to this piece. I love the way you did this. Text also played a big part to add texture to the picture. In the long run texture was very subtly used in this picture.
Raymond
3. Project 2 Critique – Color
How is color used in the overall composition? Which colors dominate which reinforce the concept? How is color value used in composition? Be specific and use terms related to color.
Color is used in this composition to add value and perception and the intensity of green is really apparent. The dominant color in this piece is definitely green. I really don’t see a lot of originality in this picture not very interesting. The use of only the one color made the picture look bland. I think that the incorporation of more colors could have really made this picture more fun.
Jimmy
3. Project 2 Critique – Personal Perspective 1
How effectively was the concept of “green-ness” explored? Do you think that this student used the elements of value, texture and color effectively to enhance the concept, how did the branding of the song interplay if at all?
The concept of “green-ness” was definitely used in this picture. The way he showed the ocean and sky and animals really gave the realm of tranquility and the text in the picture noted the need to not only think about one self but also of the things around us. The value in the picture in the form of lightness gave this picture calmness and gave a sense of freshness. The song in my opinion interplayed in the picture with the message the piece gave.
Michael
Project 2 Critique – Personal Perspective 2
3. What do you think of the quality of the design and composition? Would this design work well as a billboard or for multi-purpose advertising? Does the concept of sustainability as far as water the strongest focus of the piece?, Please explain in detail.
I think that the quality and design of this picture portrays a lot of depth. It speaks with the pictures and how there put together. I think value was very adequately used to focus on the water which is definitely the strongest piece. This design would work excellently as a billboard because it’s straight to the point in delivering the message of water conservation. It is beautifully put together and its meaning is unmistakable. I think this picture is awesome, I really liked it.
