Question 4 – Personal Perspective – Concept–Alma
How effectively was the concept of “transportation” explored? Do you think that this student successfully communicated transportation as the main idea of the composition; if not what do you think the main concept is?
I do not know what the main concept of the image is.
Some possibilities:
“You never know what you will encounter when you jetski.”
“Giant penguin or orca meets or eats man?”
The giant penguin or orca confuses the viewer as to what the main concept of the image actually is.
If you are going to use a giant penguin or orca, then it seems to me you need some text or copy to clarify the point or concept trying to be conveyed by the image.
Raymond said,
September 29, 2009 at 4:59 pm
Question 4 – Personal Perspective – Concept–Alma
How effectively was the concept of “transportation” explored? Do you think that this student successfully communicated transportation as the main idea of the composition; if not what do you think the main concept is?
I do not know what the main concept of the image is.
Some possibilities:
“You never know what you will encounter when you jetski.”
“Giant penguin or orca meets or eats man?”
The giant penguin or orca confuses the viewer as to what the main concept of the image actually is.
If you are going to use a giant penguin or orca, then it seems to me you need some text or copy to clarify the point or concept trying to be conveyed by the image.
Is this the Emperor Penguin:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:Emperor_Penguin_Manchot_empereur.jpg
Or is this a killer whale or orca?
Suggest you add a link below the image to a larger image on the student server.
The image of the jetski and the sharp turn works with the water and penguin image.
However, the wave breaking on the shore looks totally fake.
I do not know what those two orange things are on either side towards the bottom of the image–gold fish?
I need to see a bigger image on the student server to fairly evaluate the image.
Raymond