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September 27, 2009 at 7:46 pm
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Raymond said,
September 28, 2009 at 11:03 pm
Question 4 – Personal Perspective – Concept–Alma
How effectively was the concept of “transportation” explored? Do you think that this student successfully communicated transportation as the main idea of the composition; if not what do you think the main concept is?
I do not know what the main concept of the image is.
Some possibilities:
“You never know what you will encounter when you jetski.”
“Giant penguin or orca eats man?”
The giant penquin or orca confuses the viewer as to what the main concept is.
If you are going to use a giant penquin or orca, then it seems to me you need some text or copy to clarify the point of the image.
Is this the Emperor Penguin:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:Emperor_Penguin_Manchot_empereur.jpg
Or is this a killer whale or orca?
The image of the jetski and the sharp turn works with the water and penguin image.
However, the wave breaking on the shore looks totally fake.
I do not know what those orange things are–gold fish?
I need to see a bigger image on the student server to fairly evaluate the image.
Raymond